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A couple race against time to track down a high school student who murdered their daughter.
I’m missing the "why them" to save the day and not the police and why the parents of this murdered teen have to race against time - are they next? Keep going.
I’m missing the “why them” to save the day and not the police and why the parents of this murdered teen have to race against time – are they next?
Keep going.
See lessA resourceful woman tries to single-handedly kill a nocturnal monster that’s after her and her disabled best friend.
Take out the adjectives. "A woman tries to single-handedly kill a monster that's after her best friend."
Take out the adjectives.
“A woman tries to single-handedly kill a monster that’s after her best friend.”
See lessA dutiful farmer’s wife, who’s unable to have children, tries to save two immigrant children from her husband, who’s using illegal immigrants as nutrients for his crops.
Dig it! Upon reading I was immediately struck with "A barren woman on a barren farm saves two children of migrant workers from becoming fertilizer" then the end vanished. So, I added this "at the hands of her desperate husband". Maybe the community can help restructure. "A barren woman on a barren fRead more
Dig it!
Upon reading I was immediately struck with “A barren woman on a barren farm saves two children of migrant workers from becoming fertilizer” then the end vanished. So, I added this “at the hands of her desperate husband”. Maybe the community can help restructure.
“A barren woman on a barren farm saves two children of migrant workers from becoming fertilizer at the hands of her desperate husband”
Hope this helps, take care.
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