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  1. Posted: May 29, 2020In: Horror

    Professor Taian Russo returns possessed artifacts from a mysterious island where Heather, a 17th century Scottish woman, was exiled to.? He must help her find peace before her possessive powers take full control.

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    Added an answer on May 30, 2020 at 5:24 am

    Very very helpful! The Lady of the Heather was the supposed great granddaughter of Bonnie Prince Charlie, and a Jacobite. There is a book by Will Lawson on her. Screenplay I wrote 91 pages. In my screenplay she's falsely accused of witchcraft and a nobleman Sir Robert Stuart saves her. Great feedbacRead more

    Very very helpful! The Lady of the Heather was the supposed great granddaughter of Bonnie Prince Charlie, and a Jacobite. There is a book by Will Lawson on her. Screenplay I wrote 91 pages. In my screenplay she’s falsely accused of witchcraft and a nobleman Sir Robert Stuart saves her. Great feedback THANKS! I will work on this! Sarah ?
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  2. Posted: May 22, 2020In: Horror

    An? wheelchair-bound college girl must use her physical abilities and mental acumen to save her trapped friends from zombies who have surrounded their cottage.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on May 28, 2020 at 1:06 am

    I get this wheelchair-bound character it helps to ramp up the primal fear factor, but in horror movies remember evil is the star. That is what folks are paying to see. If you want a story where your wheelchair-bound character prevails e.g. ?girl must use her physical abilities and mental acumen to sRead more

    I get this wheelchair-bound character it helps to ramp up the primal fear factor, but in horror movies remember evil is the star. That is what folks are paying to see. If you want a story where your wheelchair-bound character prevails e.g. ?girl must use her physical abilities and mental acumen to save? shoot for a Thriller or in this case Thriller-horror mashup.
    Curious to know if you are going to rewrite based on the coverage you received.
    If so, I would pay to see the following ?

    • A murderous girl clique lures an easy target (wheelchair-bound girl) to their lake cabin kill zone but gets the shock of their life when they discover she teams up with their former victims (zombies) to turn the tables.
    • A wheelchair-bound girl must escape from the observation deck of a quarantined Empire State Building during a blackout as hordes of zombies chew their way up the 102 floors.

    Take care.

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  3. Posted: May 27, 2020In: Horror

    A selfish party-animal on a fast track to nowhere decides to volunteer at the children?s hospital to win back his ex-girlfriend. But when the children in his care turn into flesh-eating demons, he dives in the thick of an invasion to save her, joining a group of proper do-gooders as they search for survivors.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on May 27, 2020 at 12:37 am

    I've commented on your previous one. In future, try to keep it all within one post. It's easier for other users to see the evolution of your logline. What I do is update the main one and put a "1st version" in the comments. You could always boost it then if you wanted.

    I’ve commented on your previous one. In future, try to keep it all within one post. It’s easier for other users to see the evolution of your logline. What I do is update the main one and put a “1st version” in the comments. You could always boost it then if you wanted.

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