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Chained together by backwoods people, a wanted bank-robber and his hostage must work together to escape and survive through unknown terrain.
The "backwoods people" part of the logline doesn't necessarily relate in any clear way to needing to survive through unknown terrain. The event doesn't clearly correlate with the action taken to correct it. Perhaps it needs to be clarified, why the backwoods people are a threat, because that's alsoRead more
The “backwoods people” part of the logline doesn’t necessarily relate in any clear way to needing to survive through unknown terrain.
The event doesn’t clearly correlate with the action taken to correct it.
Perhaps it needs to be clarified, why the backwoods people are a threat, because that’s also not necessarily a given?
What’s the arc of the protagonist? Could you provide a flaw that indicates the change the protagonist will experience across the story?
See lessMassacres and mysterious disappearings are occuring in the Kabyle mountain regions of Algeria by a dangerous beast. A professional hunter is engaged by authorities to track down the creature and eliminate it, he will soon realize the task won’t be as simple as his previous achievements.
"When he's hired to track down a mysterious beast who has been terrorizing the people of the Kabyle mountains, a professional hunter soon finds the tables turned when he and his crew become the hunted."
“When he’s hired to track down a mysterious beast who has been terrorizing the people of the Kabyle mountains, a professional hunter soon finds the tables turned when he and his crew become the hunted.”
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Story is conflict, and conflict from a story standpoint is what is standing between the lead character accomplishing his or her goal. Since your logline doesn't tell us what the lead character's goal is, we, the reader, do not know what the conflict is, which means we do not know what the story is aRead more
Story is conflict, and conflict from a story standpoint is what is standing between the lead character accomplishing his or her goal. Since your logline doesn’t tell us what the lead character’s goal is, we, the reader, do not know what the conflict is, which means we do not know what the story is about.
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