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When his devout daughter is possessed by the spirits of two revengeful children in order to exact revenge on their remorseless nurse, an accused and suspended priest must pull himself together and exorcise her before she kills the nurse- who happens to be his wife.
I'm honestly not getting much intrigue out of your explanation about why the children are angry.? I think the priest being "suspended" in some way is interesting.? And him trying to expunge the spirits from his daughter before they kill his wife is interesting.? I think this would make for a very clRead more
I’m honestly not getting much intrigue out of your explanation about why the children are angry.? I think the priest being “suspended” in some way is interesting.? And him trying to expunge the spirits from his daughter before they kill his wife is interesting.? I think this would make for a very clean logline too:
A disgraced priest must exorcise vengeful spirits from his daughter before she kills his wife.
Definitely see if others agree and disagree with me, however, before taking my advice.
See lessMary believes that she is having a cryptic pregnancy, but her doctor and her boyfriend don?t believe her. After she gives birth at home her child is taken from her by mysterious government organization, Mary has to fight her own self doubt to recover her child and prove her sanity.
Kind of like a horror retelling of the Jesus birth story... in concept, it sounds good, but in its current form the logline isn't working. It's too wordy and most readers won't get past the logic flaws.? Also, best to define one goal, and in this case, her sanity pales in comparison to finding her bRead more
Kind of like a horror retelling of the Jesus birth story… in concept, it sounds good, but in its current form the logline isn’t working.
It’s too wordy and most readers won’t get past the logic flaws.? Also, best to define one goal, and in this case, her sanity pales in comparison to finding her baby.
See lessWhen a demonic book is brought into a college couple home, the couple must find the source of there internal struggles before they become its next victim.
I like the premise and can see some of the scenes already, but trying to steer away from Star Trek references: "An academic couple's dark secrets attract the even darker energy of an ancient book lurking in the college library, and the unwitting pair must resolve their past before the book swallowsRead more
I like the premise and can see some of the scenes already, but trying to steer away from Star Trek references:
“An academic couple’s dark secrets attract the even darker energy of an ancient book lurking in the college library, and the unwitting pair must resolve their past before the book swallows their very existence.”
I refer to “Day of the Dove” (1968), a classic Star Trek episode that strikes many chords.
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