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A group of rich, snobby college students take their wheelchair-bound female friend to a cabin for the weekend where they are attacked by a pack of female zombies. The students can?t figure out why until the girl discovers that these students murdered them? and they are seeking revenge!
A wheelchair bound student and her friends fend off female zombies, whilst trapped in a cabin, however she soon discovers her friends murdered them - and are seeking revenge.It's a cool concept. Well done.We've got a trapped scenario/crucible.A unique character - there's plenty of empathy for wheel-Read more
A wheelchair bound student and her friends fend off female zombies, whilst trapped in a cabin, however she soon discovers her friends murdered them – and are seeking revenge.
It’s a cool concept. Well done.
We’ve got a trapped scenario/crucible.
A unique character – there’s plenty of empathy for wheel-chair bound zombie fighters.?
A live or die scenario.
A fish out of water (she’s surrounded by zombies and murderers and she’s like the only normal one).
A dilemma – get killed by zombies or fight alongside the murderers.
A twist/hook – her friends are the murderers.
So yeah…
Good luck.
See lessA journalist who escaped an abusive religious cult plans to sneak back in and get his younger brother out, but his plan goes awry when the cult leader’s prophecies come true and all current members receive supernatural powers.
I believe that the most important part of a logline is the story hook, the element that grabs attention, arouses curiusity, makes people want to read the script. This logline buries the story hook when it should lead with it.The plot, the really interesting part, begins: "when the prophecies come trRead more
I believe that the most important part of a logline is the story hook, the element that grabs attention, arouses curiusity, makes people want to read the script. This logline buries the story hook when it should lead with it.
The plot, the really interesting part, begins: “when the prophecies come true and all current members receive supernatural powers.”
Unfortunately, the logline doesn’t specify whether the powers are beneficial or harmful. If cult members start healing the sick, raising the dead, what’s the problem? Isn’t that a good thing?
Well, the logline is tagged as a horror flick so I guess it’s safe to assume the powers aren’t a good thing.? Okay,? in what way? What specific threat do they pose? And what can the journalist, a mere mortal, do about it? What can anyone do about it?
As a result of this fulfillment of prophecy, what becomes the journalist’s objective goal?
See lessA farmer believes there are reincarnated humans trapped in the bodies of his goats and together they escape into the forest where the livestock speak for the first time, their agenda sinister, their ambition astronomical.
This is a good setup.? I think it's attention grabbing and amusing.? But you need a goal here for the farmer.? Now that he's able to communicate with the animals, I guess you want him to stop their evil plans and save the world.? It'd be nice if it was a little more interesting than that, but it's bRead more
This is a good setup.? I think it’s attention grabbing and amusing.? But you need a goal here for the farmer.? Now that he’s able to communicate with the animals, I guess you want him to stop their evil plans and save the world.? It’d be nice if it was a little more interesting than that, but it’s better than just saying what he discovers the goats are up to.? As of now, I’d definitely want to see the trailer, but I’m not convinced you have a worthwhile story yet.
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