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  1. Posted: April 2, 2023In: Horror

    Two blood testy women killer brothers, must face each other when One fall inlove with a woman

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on April 9, 2023 at 6:08 pm

    You might try to re-write the logline using different words. It took me about 5 tries to unravel your sentence. That is not a criticism of the premise, it's just that the logline is a bit hard to read. And that is what re-writing is for. Keep working on this, and good luck.

    You might try to re-write the logline using different words. It took me about 5 tries to unravel your sentence. That is not a criticism of the premise, it’s just that the logline is a bit hard to read. And that is what re-writing is for. Keep working on this, and good luck.

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  2. Posted: March 23, 2023In: Horror

    After a shadow figure haunts his son, an impulsive man embarks on a journey to his childhood home to reconnect with his violent father and avoid passing on generational trauma.

    Lexington101 Penpusher
    Added an answer on March 24, 2023 at 8:40 am

    This is good, but what I would like to see cleared up is the ' shadow figure haunts his son' how does this fit into the rest of the story? Does it come back that the father knows who this figure is? Does this figure remind him of the past? At the moment I don't see how it ties into the big picture.

    This is good, but what I would like to see cleared up is the ‘ shadow figure haunts his son’ how does this fit into the rest of the story? Does it come back that the father knows who this figure is? Does this figure remind him of the past? At the moment I don’t see how it ties into the big picture.

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  3. Posted: March 16, 2023In: Horror

    The global rise of demonic possessions brings together five exorcists from different faiths to combat an evil unlike any they have ever encountered.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on March 16, 2023 at 6:21 am

    Leaning towards: “A global rise of demonic possessions brings together five exorcists from different faiths to save the world from evil incarnate.” Since I don’t know the boss-level evil, whether it will be spiritual or physical (sounds physical based on possessions), I riffed with “incarnate.” I woRead more

    Leaning towards:
    “A global rise of demonic possessions brings together five exorcists from different faiths to save the world from evil incarnate.”

    Since I don’t know the boss-level evil, whether it will be spiritual or physical (sounds physical based on possessions), I riffed with “incarnate.”

    I would love to watch it, make this yours. Take care.

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