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  1. Posted: February 28, 2019In: Horror

    After a moving train is hit by a strange meteor, an elite unit must survive the flesh eating demons that stand between them and the Engine Car, where they must stop the train from crashing. (revised edition round 1)

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on February 28, 2019 at 7:17 am

    I think the second half of the logline is very solid and an improvement over the original. However, to follow up on what Mikepedley85 said: Film is a visual medium. Any meteor that would be visually impressive on screen would destroy the train and leave a huge crater. Any meteor that would not destrRead more

    I think the second half of the logline is very solid and an improvement over the original.

    However, to follow up on what Mikepedley85 said:
    Film is a visual medium. Any meteor that would be visually impressive on screen would destroy the train and leave a huge crater.
    Any meteor that would not destroy the train would be the size of a pea?and go, ‘plink’ and not be visually impressive.

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  2. Posted: February 21, 2019In: Horror

    When a streamer and his group of friends bully a stranger off a multiplayer game, they are targeted by him in real life with his own game, the streamer is left two steps behind and is in a race to stop the killings over the next 48 hours. Working Title: Stream (c)

    giannisggeorgiou Samurai
    Added an answer on February 22, 2019 at 3:08 am

    When a streamer and his group of friends bully a stranger off a multiplayer game, they are targeted by him in real life.Agreed, this is a nice I know What You Did Last Log-In?premise.with his own gameWhat do you mean? What kind of game is his? (Real-life game I suppose. A hunt?) You should give someRead more

    When a streamer and his group of friends bully a stranger off a multiplayer game, they are targeted by him in real life.

    Agreed, this is a nice I know What You Did Last Log-In?premise.

    with his own game

    What do you mean? What kind of game is his? (Real-life game I suppose. A hunt?) You should give some hint about what his vengeful game is.

    …the streamer is left two steps behind and is in a race to stop the killings over the next 48 hours.

    I didn’t get this part at all. Two steps behind whom? What killings?

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  3. Posted: February 16, 2019In: Horror

    When mutilated animals begin showing up in a small Ohio town and all signs begin to point in an impossible, draconic direction, a new sheriff with something to prove must enlist the help of the high school janitor with a mysterious family past to kill the beast before anyone else gets hurt.

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    Jay Cannon (JC) Logliner
    Added an answer on February 18, 2019 at 6:30 am

    I like the idea, but agree with others that it is too long. Here's a suggestion: When mutilated animals begin showing up in a small Ohio town, a new sheriff with something to prove enlists the help of the high school janitor with a mysterious family past to kill the beast before anyone else gets hurRead more

    I like the idea, but agree with others that it is too long. Here’s a suggestion:

    When mutilated animals begin showing up in a small Ohio town, a new sheriff with something to prove enlists the help of the high school janitor with a mysterious family past to kill the beast before anyone else gets hurt.

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