1. Posted: April 9, 2018In:

    Re=edit As a zombie virus infects friends and family two small town stoners discover they are immune. Using their girlfriends as bait they save the community by luring the town to the school gym and getting them high.

    Richiev Singularity

    You shouldn't give away the ending in a logline. Inciting incident: Jamaican virus/immunity Lead character: a stoner Goal: Round up the town and save them before they are killed. "When he discovers he's immune to the Jamaican?zombie virus, the town stoner and his friends have one night to round up tRead more

    You shouldn’t give away the ending in a logline.
    Inciting incident: Jamaican virus/immunity
    Lead character: a stoner
    Goal: Round up the town and save them before they are killed.

    “When he discovers he’s immune to the Jamaican?zombie virus, the town stoner and his friends have one night to round up the townsfolk and get them high or they will remain zombies forever.”

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  2. Posted: April 8, 2018In:

    When a young pregnant woman finds herself unconscious in an unknown apartment, she must escape saving her unborn child from a psychopath who eats young life.

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    variable Uberwriter

    "After waking up in a vacant mall, a pregnant teenager must escape from a cannibalistic psychopath before her water breaks" It's a lousy try, you will have to edit detail for your perusal

    “After waking up in a vacant mall, a pregnant teenager must escape from a cannibalistic psychopath before her water breaks”

    It’s a lousy try, you will have to edit detail for your perusal

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  3. Posted: April 7, 2018In:

    After an accident a young boy begins to hear his cat talking to him – telling him to kill.

    variable Uberwriter

    Agreed with dpg Also he can easily overpower a cat! If the going gets tough, he can always throw it down the chute The premise of a talking tom is interesting though...

    Agreed with dpg

    Also he can easily overpower a cat!
    If the going gets tough, he can always throw it down the chute

    The premise of a talking tom is interesting though…

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