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“The Wedding Killer” In small town of Delaware The young police officer investigating , a case of murder in brides one day before their wedding day
In a small town, a murder would be a big event. Murders very seldom happen in small towns. Therefore it would be unlikely they would give the case to a 'young' police officer. That doesn't mean you cannot have a young police officer as your lead character. But you should personalize it. Have the murRead more
In a small town, a murder would be a big event. Murders very seldom happen in small towns.
See lessTherefore it would be unlikely they would give the case to a ‘young’ police officer.
That doesn’t mean you cannot have a young police officer as your lead character.
But you should personalize it.
Have the murdered bride be his sister, that way he is determined to solve the case in spite?being told to back off.
God?s Law
What's the dramatic point of trying to persuade the police?? If the culprit is supernatural, the police are powerless to do anything.? He's wasting his time (and the audience's) exploring an option he knows they are powerless to do anything about.Seems to me the logline should cut to the chase:? he'Read more
What’s the dramatic point of trying to persuade the police?? If the culprit is supernatural, the police are powerless to do anything.? He’s wasting his time (and the audience’s) exploring an option he knows they are powerless to do anything about.
Seems to me the logline should cut to the chase:? he’s got to whatever has to be done, confront the supernatural whatever-it-is himself.
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See lessWhen broke indie movie-maker and his friends heads into a desert to shot found footage horror movie, they stumble upon a real monster and have to fight to survive.
Also, does you indie movie director have a goal? Is he about to lose his home? Is his wife making him quit unless he makes a hit film? (She has given him 10 years to follow his dream, now with only a few months left this is his last chance) Is he about to lose his company? The lead having a goal couRead more
Also, does you indie movie director have a goal? Is he about to lose his home? Is his wife making him quit unless he makes a hit film? (She has given him 10 years to follow his dream, now with only a few months left this is his last chance) Is he about to lose his company?
The lead having a goal could also help distinguish your story. (Just a thought)
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