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A hardcore gamer meets the girl of his dreams who just so happens to hold the key to his inexplicable fear of the dark.
The lead meets the girl of his dreams. Great She holds the key to his fear of the dark. Even better The end. Sounds perfect... no conflict whatsoever; except that story is conflict.
The lead meets the girl of his dreams. Great
She holds the key to his fear of the dark. Even better
The end.
Sounds perfect… no conflict whatsoever; except that story is conflict.
See lessAfter she is possessed by two unresting young souls to avenge their deaths by an un- remorseful negligent nurse, a little girl must find the exorcist who can deliver her before she kills her negligent parents.
It occurs to me that if she's possessed, how does she have the free will to ?search for an exorcist? ?I would think the avenging souls might have a 2nd opinion on allowing that to happen. Isn't that's the whole point of demonic possession? ?So what's to stop them from stopping her from finding an exRead more
It occurs to me that if she’s possessed, how does she have the free will to ?search for an exorcist? ?I would think the avenging souls might have a 2nd opinion on allowing that to happen.
Isn’t that’s the whole point of demonic possession? ?So what’s to stop them from stopping her from finding an exorcist?
In the official “guide book” on exorcisms — the Bible — the victims of possession lack the free will to beg Christ to cast out the demons that possess them. ?Others have to intercede on?their behalf.
There are, after all, certain conventions to dramatizing demonic possession.
Just saying.
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Agreed with the above, the details of the obstacle will make this interesting - what is this monster all about that makes it terrifying? Does it inhibit children's dreams? Is it a chainsaw wielding madman? A riddler who locks his victims in a room with their key to salvation at their fingertips? LasRead more
Agreed with the above, the details of the obstacle will make this interesting – what is this monster all about that makes it terrifying? Does it inhibit children’s dreams? Is it a chainsaw wielding madman? A riddler who locks his victims in a room with their key to salvation at their fingertips?
Lastly, the backstory is less important and should be cut, the character description is what makes the story interesting.
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