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An wanderer and a space princess must stop an evil emperor from having their town by ecologists in order to protect the environment.
An wanderer and a space princess must stop an evil emperor from having their town by ecologists. ----- I believe the purpose of a logline isn't just to convey a story in a concise manner, but also to see if the writer can write one single compelling sentence. After all, a script or book is basicallyRead more
An wanderer and a space princess must stop an evil emperor from having their town by ecologists.
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I believe the purpose of a logline isn’t just to convey a story in a concise manner, but also to see if the writer can write one single compelling sentence.
After all, a script or book is basically a series of compelling sentences, that when strung together, tell an equally compelling story.
Therefore, before anything else, I would first make sure that your logline is the best sentence you can possibly write.
Anyway, just some thoughts, Hope this helped!
(BTW, I can’t tell from logline whether this is for the Edger Rice Burroughs story, ‘Princess of Mars’ or your own original story with the same name)
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Sounds a lot like The Goonies, except it's a map they find in that movie. Is this an example logline for The Goonies?
Sounds a lot like The Goonies, except it’s a map they find in that movie. Is this an example logline for The Goonies?
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So tell us what he's going to do about it. That's the story. Films are not just about problems, they are about how people try to solve them.
So tell us what he’s going to do about it. That’s the story. Films are not just about problems, they are about how people try to solve them.
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