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Reincarnated as a baby who kept his memory into the world of sword and magic, former shut-in mid age scientist sets on a mission to live a meaningful life, only to find out that his former boss who caused the accident and killed them both has been reincarnated aswell and is set on repeating the planet threatening experiment again. (Epic fantasy book novel)
"After his boss kills them both, a former shut-in scientist is reincarnated with his memories in a sword and magic world but must stop his former boss from finding a way to repeat the deadly experiment that could destroy the world."
“After his boss kills them both, a former shut-in scientist is reincarnated with his memories in a sword and magic world but must stop his former boss from finding a way to repeat the deadly experiment that could destroy the world.”
See lessA reluctant psychic’s near death experience reveals that soul families are trapped in karmic loops and unless she finds the strength to confront her narcissistic mother by using her psychic abilities to find their past life mistakes they will remain trapped reliving the same life and death experiences for eternity. 0 Reply Share
Good concept and your logline hits the necessary beats, but imo the sentence is just a little bit hard to read. I would consider rewording and/or cleaning up everything after "unless she finds the strength" I also think wording like "she must" would be a little clearer and eliminate unnecessary verbRead more
Good concept and your logline hits the necessary beats, but imo the sentence is just a little bit hard to read. I would consider rewording and/or cleaning up everything after “unless she finds the strength”
See lessI also think wording like “she must” would be a little clearer and eliminate unnecessary verbage.
After being accidentally injected with an experimental hyper adrenaline drug, a skinny, shy and dull-life man must learn how to use his newly ultra-energized body to escape from a secret government organization which is on the hunt for him.
Excellent! A nitpick/suggestion, I'd consider using "lifeless" over "dull-life" which sounds a little awkward imo
Excellent! A nitpick/suggestion, I’d consider using “lifeless” over “dull-life” which sounds a little awkward imo
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