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Dr Goodman struggles with an ethical dilemma to misdiagnose a patient’s husband, because he’s falling for his wife.
A doctor deliberately misdiagnoses a man's illness to guarantee his death after falling in love with the man's wife. (19 words) (With the exception of historical dramas, the general rule is to not tag a protagonist with a specific name. Rather identify him by his role in the plot.)
A doctor deliberately misdiagnoses a man’s illness to guarantee his death after falling in love with the man’s wife. (19 words)
(With the exception of historical dramas, the general rule is to not tag a protagonist with a specific name. Rather identify him by his role in the plot.)
See lessWhen a college athlete discovers that the university’s Greek Life is a front for demonic mafias who have been corrupting students with a supernatural drug, he launches a crusade against Hell, risking his enrollment, and his life, in the process.
I like the devil's pact angle, & the gateway joke. apart from the logline, the rest of the outline looks like this: A university student named Alex, struggling with peer pressure (since he doesn't knows yet - about the secret societies) and a sense of purposelessness --> rumors of a powerfulRead more
I like the devil’s pact angle, & the gateway joke.
apart from the logline, the rest of the outline looks like this:
A university student named Alex, struggling with peer pressure (since he doesn’t knows yet – about the secret societies) and a sense of purposelessness –> rumors of a powerful hallucinogen known as “Shadow’s Breath” circulate among students –> Curiosity and desperation lead Alex to consume Shadow’s Breath, seeking direction and power –> Alex experiences intense hallucinations and encounters ancient demonic entities –> In his altered state, Alex unwittingly enters into pacts with these demons, binding himself to their will –> Awakening to reality, Alex realizes the consequences of his actions and the perilous path ahead –> Alex discovers the existence of secret societies within the university, each with its own agenda regarding the supernatural –> The demons of his house reveal their true intentions to Alex –> Alex becomes embroiled in a treacherous conflict between these secret societies and the demonic forces –> Alex grapples with the addictive allure of Shadow’s Breath, facing withdrawal and temptation –> He must navigate the demands of the demons bound to him, each requiring dark favors in exchange for power –> Alex struggles to maintain his humanity amidst the corrupting influence of the demons and the drug –> As Alex delves deeper into the supernatural underworld, he uncovers the Devil’s intricate scheme to manipulate humanity, via this school –> With the clock ticking, Alex races to thwart the Devil’s plans and prevent the apocalypse –> Along the way, he forms unlikely alliances with fellow students and members of rival secret societies –> Despite the chaos unfolding around him, Alex must juggle his academic responsibilities to avoid expulsion from the university –> The pressure of maintaining his grades adds another layer of tension to his already overwhelming situation –> Alex’s academic pursuits provide him with crucial insights and resources to combat the supernatural threats –> The conflict between secret societies and demonic forces reaches its zenith as the Devil’s machinations near fruition –> Alex & the gang confronts the Devil in a climactic showdown, drawing upon their newfound strength – unity –> Through Self control and sheer determination, Alex manages to thwart the Devil’s master plan, averting the apocalypse and restoring balance –> With the crisis averted, Alex reflects on his journey and the lessons learned about power, responsibility, and the nature of evil –> He chooses to sever his ties with the demonic entities, embracing his humanity and seeking redemption –> Despite the scars left by his ordeal, Alex emerges stronger and wiser, ready to face whatever challenges the future may hold, while also getting the girl in the end 😛
Reads like Hogwarts, but since I’ve written it poorly maybe there’s some hope when you try it your way. I can see interesting parts here and there…
fwiw
See lessA 16-year-old ambitious dancer and her boyfriend discover that she is pregnant before her important competition and have to make a decision.
That's the conflict -- what's the story? All characters have to make decisions; it's the basis of every scene they're in...at least it should be. Loglines are the protagonist, antagonist, conflict, and stakes. These are hinted at here but not defined, and not in dramatic fashion. What's the competitRead more
That’s the conflict — what’s the story? All characters have to make decisions; it’s the basis of every scene they’re in…at least it should be. Loglines are the protagonist, antagonist, conflict, and stakes. These are hinted at here but not defined, and not in dramatic fashion. What’s the competition for? What does she stand to gain or lose, by winning or not? How does her condition affect this, will she drop out, dance with a big belly, hire a babysitter, what? There isn’t enough detail here to see what the story could be. An ambitious teenage dancer discovers she’s pregnant right before a big competition, and has to track down her boyfriend to tell him before showtime. If it’s more about whether they opt to keep the kid, mention that. Whatever makes the stakes clear, with the main character’s goal stated.
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