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Members of an elite surveillance team are being murdered one by one as they relentlessly track down the brutal killers of a young trainee.
Who is the lead character?
Who is the lead character?
See lessA disgraced ex-cop, offered the chance to regain custody of his son must partner with a soon to retire ex-prosecutor to catch a serial killer before he kills more children, digging for the truth they unearth a hidden layer of personal and professional secrets of those involved from within and outside the law.
I like this logline a lot but seems it has several plots and not sure which one is the main one. Let's try simplifying it. A disgraced ex-cop [CHARACTTER], offered the chance to regain custody of his son must [ACTION/GOAL] partner with a soon to retire ex-prosecutor [CHARACTTER] to catch a serial kiRead more
I like this logline a lot but seems it has several plots and not sure which one is the main one. Let’s try simplifying it.
A disgraced ex-cop [CHARACTTER], offered the chance to regain custody of his son must [ACTION/GOAL] partner with a soon to retire ex-prosecutor [CHARACTTER] to catch a serial killer before he kills more children [ACTION/GOAL], digging for the truth they unearth a hidden layer of personal and professional secrets of those involved from within and outside the law [ACTION/GOAL].
Maybe something like
“A strait-laced prosecutor has to partner up with the disgraced ex-cop who he got fired in order to save his kidnapped son from a serial killer.”
See lessLogline . AD 2005 . Ajay. A young man dies in car accident but his girlfriend Maya survived. 25 years later Ajay would be brought back to life with futuristic technology . Will he find his ladylove and live happily ever after with their only love child?
Interesting take on a love story, consider the following: I started with this “Clinically dead for twenty-five years, a trust-fund baby is brought out of stasis only to discover ...” But your premise is not about him doing a job for the people who brought him back e.g., “Demolition Man” – it’s a lovRead more
Interesting take on a love story, consider the following:
I started with this “Clinically dead for twenty-five years, a trust-fund baby is brought out of stasis only to discover …” But your premise is not about him doing a job for the people who brought him back e.g., “Demolition Man” – it’s a love story after that, hmm.
How about:
“A once betrothed young man must rekindle a lost love in order to find his love-child-now-adult when awoke from a twenty-five-year stasis sleep”
Hope you find this constructive, keep going!
Fun fact: I will take a shot of whiskey for each hyphen used 😉
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