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When a teenage law student finds a group of Jewish toddlers that have escaped a brutal round-up, she must form a resistance group that smuggles them from Nazi-occupied Amsterdam to foster families in the countryside. Inundated by other desperate Jewish parents, who want to save their children from the camps, the group must work 24/7. Unfortunately, so does the Gestapo. Based on a true story.
I think your logline should consist of just the first sentence you've written, plus the point about other Jewish families requiring help from your MC. That she works non-stop and so does the Gestapo is to be expected and needs not be said. "Inundated" is too uncommon a word, I needed a dictionary toRead more
I think your logline should consist of just the first sentence you’ve written, plus the point about other Jewish families requiring help from your MC. That she works non-stop and so does the Gestapo is to be expected and needs not be said. “Inundated” is too uncommon a word, I needed a dictionary to know it and many others will too. Try using a more familiar word.
See lessAfter the death of his secret lover, a closeted small-town lawyer struggles with his drug addiction until he finds fulfillment in his long-forgotten passion: dancing
I like it! It makes sense to me and I picture it being a drama, maybe with some comedy. I would specify the drug(s) he's addicted to and what form of dancing your MC does. I prefer Logline #2 because "leaves his old life" paints a clearer picture than saying: "until he finds fulfillment". I would adRead more
I like it! It makes sense to me and I picture it being a drama, maybe with some comedy. I would specify the drug(s) he’s addicted to and what form of dancing your MC does. I prefer Logline #2 because “leaves his old life” paints a clearer picture than saying: “until he finds fulfillment”. I would add what the main obstacle is for your MC, what has the potential to negatively affect his life? Is your MC still an addict after finding his true calling?
See lessA humble hover-car racer is chosen for his exposure to high velocities to help salvage Earth and free society from the restrictive confines of life aboard a space station.
"A humble hover-car racer is chosen to explore a destroyed earth and discover a safe place for earth's survivors on his space station to start over."
“A humble hover-car racer is chosen to explore a destroyed earth and discover a safe place for earth’s survivors on his space station to start over.”
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