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Un hombre encapuchado libera de su encarcelamiento a un joven ciega por error. Esa noche descubre que es la sobrina del rey, y la única superviviente de los Levende. Al mirarla fijamente ve el potencial y decide entranarla para acabar con el rey de Flertall.
"A hooded man frees a blind young man from imprisonment by mistake. That night he discovers that she is the king's niece, and the sole survivor of the Levende. Staring at her, he sees the potential and decides to train her to kill the King of Flertall." I dig it, but struggle with your protagonist,Read more
“A hooded man frees a blind young man from imprisonment by mistake. That night he discovers that she is the king’s niece, and the sole survivor of the Levende. Staring at her, he sees the potential and decides to train her to kill the King of Flertall.”
I dig it, but struggle with your protagonist, is it the warrior or the niece?
See lessCan a simple minded accountant, even outwit a butterfly, let alone learn something, when he attends a day long workshop on pet zombie care, given by a snide mysterious intellectual snob.
If the lead character is smart enough to be an accountant I am sure he is capable of doing a one day workshop on zombie wrangling. 1: Your character should have a dream or goal which makes this class important to him. Maybe he has always dreamed of being a zombie wrangler. 2: Your story should haveRead more
If the lead character is smart enough to be an accountant
I am sure he is capable of doing a one day workshop on zombie wrangling.
1: Your character should have a dream or goal which makes this class important to him. Maybe he has always dreamed of being a zombie wrangler.
2: Your story should have recognizable stakes. If he fails what he will lose? Will he… a. get fired, b. fail to reach his dream, c. Be eaten by zombies? What are the stakes?
3: I would avoid writing loglines in the form of a question.
This idea is different, a series of pieces I have not seen put together in this particular way before. Forrest Gump meets the Walking Dead.
So the story is original but I think you might give the logline another try.
See less“Afectada por la trágica muerte de su hijo, busca sanar su mente en el pueblo de su infancia, para descubrir que ella no es la única visita inesperada.”
Affected by the tragic death of her son, she seeks to heal her mind in the town of her childhood, only to discover that she is not the only unexpected visitor.
Affected by the tragic death of her son, she seeks to heal her mind in the town of her childhood, only to discover that she is not the only unexpected visitor.
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