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(REVISED.) When the reluctant Sheriff of Sweetwater on a colony of Mars stumbles on a plan to destroy the town to make room for an illegal worm farm, he and his friends have to defend the town he loves from a megalomaniac Soybean Magnate.
FWIW: I don't see anything in the logline that makes it *necessary* for the story to be set on Mars. OK, it's different--but is it absolutely necessary? Why is it the case that the plot wouldn't work on any other planet/setting? Setting the story on Mars signals to would-be producers that they willRead more
FWIW: I don’t see anything in the logline that makes it *necessary* for the story to be set on Mars. OK, it’s different–but is it absolutely necessary? Why is it the case that the plot wouldn’t work on any other planet/setting?
Setting the story on Mars signals to would-be producers that they will have to budget in extra $,$$$,$$$ for special effects and props. The plot should justify that additional expense.
Just saying.
See lessA tragic accident drives a Nobel laureate neuroscientist to resurrect his wife with his revolutionary mind uploading and artificial brain technologies, only for her to become a robotic killer endangering everyone including their children.
This is clear and sounds like a very intriguing script. The only thing that staggered me, and which I'd suggest deleting, is "mind uploading and artificial." So you'd be left with: A tragic accident drives a Nobel laureate neuroscientist to resurrect his wife with his revolutionary brain technologieRead more
This is clear and sounds like a very intriguing script. The only thing that staggered me, and which I’d suggest deleting, is “mind uploading and artificial.” So you’d be left with:
A tragic accident drives a Nobel laureate neuroscientist to resurrect his wife with his revolutionary brain technologies, only for her to become a robotic killer endangering everyone including their children.
See lessThree reckless, wealthy American playboys who treat women as disposable thrills embark on another hedonistic night abroad—only to cross paths with a mysterious girl and her friend who turn the tables, dragging them into a terrifying game where their darkest habits become their worst nightmare.
Intriguing, but at 46 words, it runs a bit long. Could be shortened, something like: Three wealthy American playboys who treat women as disposable thrills cross paths with two girls who turn their darkest habits into their worst nightmare.
Intriguing, but at 46 words, it runs a bit long. Could be shortened, something like:
Three wealthy American playboys who treat women as disposable thrills cross paths with two girls who turn their darkest habits into their worst nightmare.
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