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When tragedy befalls a prehistoric teen, he must join forces with a mysterious ally to unite humanity and overcome an extraterrestrial threat that could end all life on earth.
The explanation is more interesting than the logline. That's where the story hook seems to lie. In BCE, an alien race has "domesticated" feral homo sapiens like humans domesticated dogs from wolves. And for what nefarious purpose? I mean, if dogs aren't complaining, got a good deal out of the the arRead more
The explanation is more interesting than the logline. That’s where the story hook seems to lie. In BCE, an alien race has “domesticated” feral homo sapiens like humans domesticated dogs from wolves.
And for what nefarious purpose? I mean, if dogs aren’t complaining, got a good deal out of the the arrangement, why *must* homo sapiens rebel?
And tragedy is a vague term. It could refer to any number of unhappy events. And in a logline, a word that could refer to any number of things means nothing at all.
Be specific.
See lessAn aging drug addict’s life changed when his granddaughter who aged out of foster care comes for a visit.
"When his granddaughter ages out of foster care, an aging drug addict fights to get clean so he can be the grandfather he never was or thought he could be."
“When his granddaughter ages out of foster care, an aging drug addict fights to get clean so he can be the grandfather he never was or thought he could be.”
See lessA bored Barista becomes a teacher at a school in the town of Homewardsboundsville MO, where students with special abilities are being tested on. He not only has to navigate the strange characters and environment but figure out how to stop the downfall of this generation of mankind.
Hi Christopherandre25, INTENTION: figure out how to stop downfall of this generation of mankind. OBSTACLE: figure out how to stop downfall of this generation of mankind. (quite an obstacle ha.) First off - there's a lot of ornamental for a logline. I'm not sure what him being a "bored barista" has tRead more
Hi Christopherandre25,
INTENTION: figure out how to stop downfall of this generation of mankind.
OBSTACLE: figure out how to stop downfall of this generation of mankind. (quite an obstacle ha.)
First off – there’s a lot of ornamental for a logline. I’m not sure what him being a “bored barista” has to do with anything.
Lets see…
When he moves to a town filled with children with special abilities, a teacher must (stop the downfall of this generation of mankind?) *** you need to be very specific and clear how he’s going to do this.
before/or else. What happens if he doesn’t?
Hope this helps.
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