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A hospice nurse struggles with reality when an elderly, comatose patient begins terrorizing her dreams–and then drags the nightmare into her waking life.
Great synopsis. I added "newly hired" to answer "why now?" Also, to stand out, consider "night terrors" instead of nightmares; they're rare among adults but may be a good fit for this premise. A newly hired hospice nurse begins to question her sanity when nightmares of an elderly comatose patient beRead more
Great synopsis.
I added “newly hired” to answer “why now?” Also, to stand out, consider “night terrors” instead of nightmares; they’re rare among adults but may be a good fit for this premise.
A newly hired hospice nurse begins to question her sanity when nightmares of an elderly comatose patient become a reality.
Make this yours, take care.
See lessThe door of the gallery opens wide and the young woman without looking around walks straight into the hall towards the man with a gloomy face. It is not expected, but they meet right here, in one of the most important galleries in the world. Who would have thought about it twenty years ago in a small town train station when they saw each other for the last time.
You are describing a scene. But a logline is a one-sentence synopsis of the plot. A logline will most likely have 1: A Lead character 2: An inciting incident 3: A goal 4: And Conflict (something standing in the way of the goal) All in about 25 to 30 words Can there be exceptions, yes Can you occasioRead more
You are describing a scene.
But a logline is a one-sentence synopsis of the plot.
A logline will most likely have
1: A Lead character
2: An inciting incident
3: A goal
4: And Conflict (something standing in the way of the goal)
All in about 25 to 30 words
Can there be exceptions, yes
See lessCan you occasionally break the rules, yes
But for the most part, you are giving the reader enough information to visualize the plot, without giving away the ending.
one of the twin police duo is not in his right mind but he is very smart also no one knows what macabre plans this one has in mind implicates him in wanting to commit a murder in fact there are investigations but he camouflages himself in his own work which leads him to not be discovered in the future from there they will be involved in other matters including the stalking of his brother’s daughter, his twin..
This reads like a stream-of-consciousness run-on sentence. I have read it twice and still don't have a clue what it is about. May I suggest you read the training materials on this site? This is not a story concept as it merely lists two events. Read the sections labeled "Formula" and "Examples", theRead more
This reads like a stream-of-consciousness run-on sentence. I have read it twice and still don’t have a clue what it is about.
May I suggest you read the training materials on this site? This is not a story concept as it merely lists two events.
Read the sections labeled “Formula” and “Examples”, then read some example loglines here on the site and learn from the reviews.
Good luck!
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