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  1. Posted: August 19, 2020In: Thriller

    A college student’s life on the line when he receives mysterious phone call from a stranger who invades his home and kidnaps his family.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on August 20, 2020 at 8:23 am

    You seem to have three things that set this story in motion, 1: He receives a mysterious phone call from a stranger, 2: his home is invaded, 3: His family is kidnapped. You should pick one, then tell us what he must do about it.

    You seem to have three things that set this story in motion,

    1: He receives a mysterious phone call from a stranger,
    2: his home is invaded,
    3: His family is kidnapped.

    You should pick one, then tell us what he must do about it.

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  2. Posted: August 19, 2020In: SciFi

    A homeless man commits suicide, resurrects as Christ the Lord, and takes his revenge against a racist homicidal police force.

    CLAY53 Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 19, 2020 at 10:25 am

    My sentence structure had too many and's so I wrote a more concise sentence

    My sentence structure had too many and’s so I wrote a more concise sentence

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  3. Posted: August 19, 2020In: SciFi

    When his father, gunned down by terrorists, dies on her operating table, an atheist cryogenecist and an orphaned catholic doctor partake in a near death expermiment searching for proof of an afterlife.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on August 19, 2020 at 7:13 am

    Truth about what? Be specific. Loglines are about the pursuit of a specific objective goal. A specific objective goal is a person, object, or event that can be visualized on screen. What's the visual for "truth"? What does "truth" look like?

    Truth about what? Be specific. Loglines are about the pursuit of a specific objective goal. A specific objective goal is a person, object, or event that can be visualized on screen.

    What’s the visual for “truth”? What does “truth” look like?

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