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After a raid by a corrupt government leaves his partner dead, a desperate man uses gang controlled technology to escape his dystopian world to an alternate reality in a bid to replace a version of himself living an idealistic life.
Is there an inciting incident to this story? Just curious. "When (This happens) a desperate man uses underground technology to transport himself to an alternate reality in order to secretly switch places with a spoiled and privileged version of himself."
Is there an inciting incident to this story? Just curious.
“When (This happens) a desperate man uses underground technology to transport himself to an alternate reality in order to secretly switch places with a spoiled and privileged version of himself.”
See lessWhen her boyfriend’ doctors are unable to treat his fatal illness, an unsophisticated Papuan girl in service to his father must convince him to abandon his traditional medical views and travel to Papua to allow her and her Medicine man grandfather to save is life.
I think it reads well this way, from the perspective of the girlfriend. It does seem like she is the one with the actual story goal. to get her boyfriend to her medicine man Grandfather.
I think it reads well this way, from the perspective of the girlfriend. It does seem like she is the one with the actual story goal. to get her boyfriend to her medicine man Grandfather.
See lessA young LAPD officer seeks the truth about her parent’s murder and to quiet horrific flashbacks from her childhood, but the search puts her in the sights of a serial killer.
I suggest the logline should more clearly establish a causal connection between her parent's murder and her career as a cop; that is, the murder was her prime motivation for becoming a cop. And then...
I suggest the logline should more clearly establish a causal connection between her parent’s murder and her career as a cop; that is, the murder was her prime motivation for becoming a cop.
And then…
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