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Two goofballs Navy seals go back in time to Valley Forge and try and help out George Washington.
What do they help GW do!?
What do they help GW do!?
See lessIn the near future a young woman works for a corrupt committee imposing radical parental exams on couples to control population growth.
This might work better from the point of view of a couple who want to have a child more than anything in the worldNow the couple has to jump through the hoops of this corrupt committee, which stands in the way of them achieving their goal.So you would have a lead character (One of the couple) who haRead more
This might work better from the point of view of a couple who want to have a child more than anything in the world
Now the couple has to jump through the hoops of this corrupt committee, which stands in the way of them achieving their goal.
So you would have a lead character (One of the couple) who have a goal which means the world to them, and something standing in their way. (Although you might want to put a face to this committee)
And best of all the story would be personal because everyone could relate to it.
I say this because in your logline you have a lead character who has no goal, therefore there is no conflict. and without conflict, there is no story.
See lessA young woman, with the aid of her odd-ball friends learns to love life again after heartbreak.
In addition to savinh0's comment, what does she stand to lose if she fails? What are the stakes? What's getting in her way? Who or what antagonistic forces are working against her? We have to understand WHY we need to care enough about this character. As it currently stands, this is every film aboutRead more
In addition to savinh0’s comment, what does she stand to lose if she fails? What are the stakes? What’s getting in her way? Who or what antagonistic forces are working against her? We have to understand WHY we need to care enough about this character. As it currently stands, this is every film about a break up. What sets yours apart from every other? In other words, what’s your hook?
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