1. Posted: May 22, 2020In:

    An? wheelchair-bound college girl must use her physical abilities and mental acumen to save her trapped friends from zombies who have surrounded their cottage.

    Odie Samurai

    I get this wheelchair-bound character it helps to ramp up the primal fear factor, but in horror movies remember evil is the star. That is what folks are paying to see. If you want a story where your wheelchair-bound character prevails e.g. ?girl must use her physical abilities and mental acumen to sRead more

    I get this wheelchair-bound character it helps to ramp up the primal fear factor, but in horror movies remember evil is the star. That is what folks are paying to see. If you want a story where your wheelchair-bound character prevails e.g. ?girl must use her physical abilities and mental acumen to save? shoot for a Thriller or in this case Thriller-horror mashup.
    Curious to know if you are going to rewrite based on the coverage you received.
    If so, I would pay to see the following ?

    • A murderous girl clique lures an easy target (wheelchair-bound girl) to their lake cabin kill zone but gets the shock of their life when they discover she teams up with their former victims (zombies) to turn the tables.
    • A wheelchair-bound girl must escape from the observation deck of a quarantined Empire State Building during a blackout as hordes of zombies chew their way up the 102 floors.

    Take care.

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  2. Posted: May 27, 2020In:

    A selfish party-animal on a fast track to nowhere decides to volunteer at the children?s hospital to win back his ex-girlfriend. But when the children in his care turn into flesh-eating demons, he dives in the thick of an invasion to save her, joining a group of proper do-gooders as they search for survivors.

    Mike Pedley Singularity

    I've commented on your previous one. In future, try to keep it all within one post. It's easier for other users to see the evolution of your logline. What I do is update the main one and put a "1st version" in the comments. You could always boost it then if you wanted.

    I’ve commented on your previous one. In future, try to keep it all within one post. It’s easier for other users to see the evolution of your logline. What I do is update the main one and put a “1st version” in the comments. You could always boost it then if you wanted.

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  3. Posted: May 25, 2020In:

    When Michael loses his wife and two children in a horrific car accident, he recovers a tunnel to the past before they die, and fights against fate to prevent them from taking the car on that fateful day.

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    Richiev Singularity

    I had a weird thought for this:A: What if the husband succeeds in saving his wife, but in the process is hit by the very car which killed his family.B: The story returns to the new timeline the wife is alive, the husband is dead.C: She then discovers the time tunnel and vows to use it to save her deRead more

    I had a weird thought for this:

    A: What if the husband succeeds in saving his wife, but in the process is hit by the very car which killed his family.

    B: The story returns to the new timeline the wife is alive, the husband is dead.

    C: She then discovers the time tunnel and vows to use it to save her dead husband.

    D: She enters the tunnel in order to save her husband… fade to black. (THE END)

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