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An Indigenous detective faces off with the unwritten law of nature an eye for an eye. He must immerse in a world of life and death before the hunters become the hunted.
After reading your logline, I am unsure what the story is about. You should try writing a second logline using completely different words to tell the story differently. That does not mean your story isn't good, it just means the logline is a tiny bit vague.
After reading your logline, I am unsure what the story is about.
You should try writing a second logline using completely different words to tell the story differently.
That does not mean your story isn’t good, it just means the logline is a tiny bit vague.
See lessWhen attending a brutal dance audition, a meticulous dancer must break free from conformity, unleashing her authentic individuality to claim the elusive path to success.
Good job Amy! I think all we want to know as readers is how the audition will be brutal. Like physically or mentally? I like that line "unleashing her authentic individuality," it's like showcasing a style of dance within a stylistic story. Well done!
Good job Amy! I think all we want to know as readers is how the audition will be brutal. Like physically or mentally? I like that line “unleashing her authentic individuality,” it’s like showcasing a style of dance within a stylistic story. Well done!
See lessWhen he discovers that his job is killing him, a shy kitchen hand must tell his sleazy boss that he needs to quit.
Revised version: When he discovers that his job is killing him, a cowardly kitchenhand must muster the courage to tell his sleazy boss that he needs to quit.
Revised version:
When he discovers that his job is killing him, a cowardly kitchenhand must muster the courage to tell his sleazy boss that he needs to quit.
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