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When traumatic memories of a past life as a WWII pilot haunt him, an emotionally fractured young man must harness his wild imagination; but when he breaks from his domineering father, he must master self doubt in order to become a whole and grounded person before losing his life to suicide
The protag’s past life is your hook, and I get it’s the catalyst for change, but have you considered exploring your hook via his grandfather? Riff: Grandad (co-pilot) was the lone survivor of the WWII plane crash that killed his best friend (now reincarnated as protag). This is your story. Just offeRead more
The protag’s past life is your hook, and I get it’s the catalyst for change, but have you considered exploring your hook via his grandfather?
Riff: Grandad (co-pilot) was the lone survivor of the WWII plane crash that killed his best friend (now reincarnated as protag).
This is your story. Just offering ways to crank the hook up to eleven 😉
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Interesting. While I am not completely sold on this, I have never seen this particular story idea before so I believe that is a major plus. Definitely, something to pursue.
Interesting.
See lessWhile I am not completely sold on this, I have never seen this particular story idea before so I believe that is a major plus.
Definitely, something to pursue.
An Indigenous detective faces off with the unwritten law of nature an eye for an eye. He must immerse in a world of life and death before the hunters become the hunted.
After reading your logline, I am unsure what the story is about. You should try writing a second logline using completely different words to tell the story differently. That does not mean your story isn't good, it just means the logline is a tiny bit vague.
After reading your logline, I am unsure what the story is about.
You should try writing a second logline using completely different words to tell the story differently.
That does not mean your story isn’t good, it just means the logline is a tiny bit vague.
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