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When introverted twins experiences racially motivated harassment from their white classmates and one is sexually assaulted by their school counselor, the twins seeks revenge by hunting everyone who mistreated them.
Agree with points made above- the first thing that came to my mind was how to get one MC with twins- perhaps they could be twins but of different race (this can happen!)- adds a twist to the racial drama that was mentioned above? If the racial abuse is commonplace from the outset of the movie, it woRead more
Agree with points made above- the first thing that came to my mind was how to get one MC with twins- perhaps they could be twins but of different race (this can happen!)- adds a twist to the racial drama that was mentioned above?
If the racial abuse is commonplace from the outset of the movie, it would make sense to have the sexual assault be the inciting event- perhaps from the only person they thought they could trust- the school counselor.
See lessAfter a teenage daughter of a imprisoned mob boss who is a student of his gets kidnapped, a teacher moonlights himself to support his family as a taxi driver decides to take the law on his own hands to get revenge on those who got into prostitution.
Sometimes it is good to let the reader know, why is it up to the lead to take action. Why don't the police do something or in the case of your story, why doesn't the mob boss send his goons out to get revenge.Here would be an attempt to explain why it is the teacher and not someone else that takes aRead more
Sometimes it is good to let the reader know, why is it up to the lead to take action. Why don’t the police do something or in the case of your story, why doesn’t the mob boss send his goons out to get revenge.
Here would be an attempt to explain why it is the teacher and not someone else that takes action.
“When his student prodigy is kidnapped by human traffickers, a Green Beret turned teacher vows to hunt down those responsible and save his student at any cost.”
See lessAn ex-hit-man comes out of retirement to track down the gangsters that killed his dog and took everything from him.
Just so you know, there is actually a category for "Examples"As for your example of a John Wick logline, I think it's pretty solid. Short and to the point.Here would be my try at it."When the dog his wife gave him is killed, a widowed hitman comes out of retirement to hunt down those responsible witRead more
Just so you know, there is actually a category for “Examples”
As for your example of a John Wick logline, I think it’s pretty solid. Short and to the point.
Here would be my try at it.
“When the dog his wife gave him is killed, a widowed hitman comes out of retirement to hunt down those responsible with extreme prejudice.”
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