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When an overdosed addict falls into a coma, he must stop his past selves from using heroin to wake up before he dies.
"When he dies of an overdose, an angel gives a heroin addict forty-eight hours to go back and convince his younger self to change his ways before it's too late."?
“When he dies of an overdose, an angel gives a heroin addict forty-eight hours to go back and convince his younger self to change his ways before it’s too late.”
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This logline seems to be written from the outside looking in, instead of from the characters point of view. As a result, the logline comes across impersonal and as Karel said, the logline doesn't sell (The Story)
This logline seems to be written from the outside looking in, instead of from the characters point of view.
As a result, the logline comes across impersonal and as Karel said, the logline doesn’t sell (The Story)
See lessCrashed on a faraway planet with retrograde amnesia, a young, ingenious but highly schizophrenic astronaut strives to rebuild her spacecraft while endeavoring to outwit a manipulative, shape-shifting alien whose sole impetus is to repopulate by abusing her as a host.
If she has progressive memory loss, but can still fix the spacecraft, does that imply that the memory loss isn't pivotal to her fate?? In a? logline a cognitive defect is only worth mentioning if it puts the attainment of her objective goal in jeopardy.?? So, for the purpose of the plot, why MUST shRead more
If she has progressive memory loss, but can still fix the spacecraft, does that imply that the memory loss isn’t pivotal to her fate?? In a? logline a cognitive defect is only worth mentioning if it puts the attainment of her objective goal in jeopardy.?? So, for the purpose of the plot, why MUST she have progressive memory loss?
It seems you’ve given the character two major tasks: 1] fix the spacecraft; 2] fend off the alien.? Which task is primary, going to get more screen time?
And if she fends off the alien, but can’t fix the spacecraft is she stranded on the planet, doomed to die anyway?
What is the story really and singularly about?? What is the overarching theme that organizes the narrative?
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