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When she starts being tormented by an evil force,? a business woman must seek help from her husband after he is committed to a psychiatric hospital for trying to open her third eye.
The protagonist should never be driven to an unwanted transformation. An audience will struggle to get behind a passive character who just lets things happen to her. PROtagonists must be PROactive. I can't help but think that the husband's story is way more interesting than the wife's. He's got an iRead more
The protagonist should never be driven to an unwanted transformation. An audience will struggle to get behind a passive character who just lets things happen to her. PROtagonists must be PROactive.
I can’t help but think that the husband’s story is way more interesting than the wife’s. He’s got an interesting history, a quest to find the Dead Sea scrolls, and a goal of using that to get his wife back. He is the one being proactive in the story, and in interesting ways. I feel like it’s a story about a man with a tragic history trying to win back the love of his life – just in a very desperate and terrifying way.
Could you start with him as the protagonist but at the midpoint you could flip the whole story and make her the protagonist? The lengths he goes to win her back start becoming increasingly violent and this sets up the wife’s goal of escape.
See lessWhen Josh receives a mysterious phone call from the hospital by his estranged son, he must decide whether to sign a medical agreement that will alter his child?s life forever.
What is the action that will carry your protagonist through 50 pages of ACT 2? He must WIN something/someone He must STOP something/someone He must RETRIEVE something/someone He must ESCAPE something/someone These 4 actions will help you think about what your character will have to do to get what thRead more
What is the action that will carry your protagonist through 50 pages of ACT 2?
He must WIN something/someone
He must STOP something/someone
He must RETRIEVE something/someone
He must ESCAPE something/someone
These 4 actions will help you think about what your character will have to do to get what they WANT and eventually what they NEED.
See lessA CSIS agent returns to duty to stop an eco-terrorist leader who’s missing his original face, and his followers who are in possession of the American government’s plans for the next 81 years.
There the problem of suspension of disbelief that goes along with any story. In the case of your story, the reader has to suspend their disbelief that the US government is competent enough to carry out an 81-year plan.
There the problem of suspension of disbelief that goes along with any story.
In the case of your story, the reader has to suspend their disbelief that the US government is competent enough to carry out an 81-year plan.
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