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  1. Posted: September 30, 2022In: Crime

    Un buscado black hack, se encontrará en una situación riesgosa al ponerse en riesgo su verdadera identidad y con ello su plan en peligro su plan contra el Estado.

    NavCR Penpusher
    Added an answer on October 2, 2022 at 12:23 pm

    . Hi, Milyy. Hope you’re great. Your logline sounds very interesting. But it's a little bit unclear. Let's break it down: 1.Who is the main character? This black hat hacker, who is the most wanted. 2.Where? Is it a goverment in crisis? is it the city of an existing or fictitious country? 3.When? I sRead more

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    Hi, Milyy. Hope you’re great.
    Your logline sounds very interesting. But it’s a little bit unclear. Let’s break it down:

    1.Who is the main character? This black hat hacker, who is the most wanted.

    2.Where? Is it a goverment in crisis? is it the city of an existing or fictitious country?

    3.When? I suppose you mean the contemporary era, although it can also be in a cyberpunk future.

    4.Why? (la razón o el llamado a la aventura) At first I thought the revealing of his identity was the reason but now I realized there’s no reason why. You can try by killing his son or lover or the good people of his country if he is the “good things that seem bad” kind of guy.

    5.Is there a more specific antagonist beside the state? Like a corrupt president, or the goverment’s best hacker. The Mc needs someone’s face to punch >:)

    6.What’s his goal? (¿Para qué?) Is his goal to clean his name or overthrow the state. I suppose it’s the last one.

    7.Stakes: (apuestas) What’s in game? His identity or the safety of his people, or maybe the security of another nation.

    With everything you have given me I can build the following example:

    “In a future dystopian city, when the corrupt government’s top hacker kills his lover, the most wanted black hat hacker must topple the government before his identity is revealed.”

    Although this is just an example, you can also draw your conclusions.

    Saludos desde México. 🙂

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  2. Posted: September 27, 2022In: Romance

    A group of 20 somethings are thrown into the gauntlet of messy romance when feelings start to get real between co-workers and unlikely friends.

    BenGilani Logliner
    Added an answer on October 1, 2022 at 3:28 pm

    Hi zdoubs, Here's how I see your story based on your logline: Emotions start to get real between a group of young colleagues and acquaintances and they are thrown into the current of messy romance." I hope this helps Good Luck

    Hi zdoubs,

    Here’s how I see your story based on your logline:

    Emotions start to get real between a group of young colleagues and acquaintances and they are thrown into the current of messy romance.”

    I hope this helps
    Good Luck

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  3. Posted: September 29, 2022In: Action

    A drug dealer’s toad venom trip turns into an action packed psychedelic nightmare when the police raid his house.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on October 1, 2022 at 8:42 am

    Dig it! Consider the following action example w/goal: “When raided by SWAT, a drug dealer high on toad venom psychedelics must fight to escape his labyrinth-like house.” Make this yours. Keep going!

    Dig it!

    Consider the following action example w/goal:
    “When raided by SWAT, a drug dealer high on toad venom psychedelics must fight to escape his labyrinth-like house.”

    Make this yours. Keep going!

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