1. Posted: September 25, 2022In:

    A divorcé redirects his self-hatred upon the very private investigator he had paid to spy on his ex after discovering their newly established relationship.

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    Hi Lotcher, What do you think of this? "An abusive jealous divorcee seeks vendetta against the private investigator he paid to spy on his ex, after discovering he has established a romantic relationship with her. I hope this helps Good Luck

    Hi Lotcher,

    What do you think of this?

    “An abusive jealous divorcee seeks vendetta against the private investigator he paid to spy on his ex, after discovering he has established a romantic relationship with her.

    I hope this helps
    Good Luck

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  2. Posted: September 23, 2022In:

    After revealing her powers to herself and the world, a promising lawyer is forced to join a hero agency to control her abilities and regain her freedom. Meanwhile, after a new law approval, a retired hero turns against the society that abandoned him

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    Hi Julio Torres, Here's what I understood reading your logline: "To harness her superhuman powers, a successful attorney turns to a superhero society, while a retired superhero takes advantage (How?) of a new law (What law?) and turns against the society he believes banished him." Use the above loglRead more

    Hi Julio Torres,

    Here’s what I understood reading your logline:

    “To harness her superhuman powers, a successful attorney turns to a superhero society, while a retired superhero takes advantage (How?) of a new law (What law?) and turns against the society he believes banished him.”

    Use the above logline as a template and rewrite it if you think I got it right.

    Good Luck

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  3. Posted: September 22, 2022In:

    KILLER BORN

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    I suggest you do what I recommended in my review of your previous loglines.

    I suggest you do what I recommended in my review of your previous loglines.

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