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  1. Posted: September 23, 2022In: Short Film

    When a promising young concert pianist is overlooked for a gifted new student, she must battle for the attention of her neglectful teacher to retain her top spot.

    BenGilani Logliner
    Added an answer on September 23, 2022 at 4:47 pm

    Hi LachieM, "To maintain her status, a promising young musician must fight for the attention of her negligent instructor, whose interest is turning towards a skillful new student." I hope this helps Good Luck

    Hi LachieM,

    “To maintain her status, a promising young musician must fight for the attention of her negligent instructor, whose interest is turning towards a skillful new student.”

    I hope this helps
    Good Luck

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  2. Posted: September 6, 2022In: Fantasy

    After capturing a dragon, a young viking has to defy previous beliefs of the animal in order to protect his people from a much bigger threat.

    BenGilani Logliner
    Added an answer on September 21, 2022 at 8:01 pm

    Hi EmelieN, Here's how I understood the story based on your proposed logline: "To protect his people against a more severe threat associated with a dragon he captured, a young Viking must ignore the superstitions and dangers that comes with the species." Use the above logline as a template if you thRead more

    Hi EmelieN,

    Here’s how I understood the story based on your proposed logline:

    “To protect his people against a more severe threat associated with a dragon he captured, a young Viking must ignore the superstitions and dangers that comes with the species.”

    Use the above logline as a template if you think I got your story right and rewrite your logline.
    I hope this helps.
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  3. Posted: September 6, 2022In: Drama

    When he discovers that he has supernatural powers, a security guard must figure out how to put them to use in order to become a real life superhero.

    BenGilani Logliner
    Added an answer on September 19, 2022 at 6:29 pm

    Hi dbengtsson501, How about: "To become a real-life superhero, a security guard must decipher how to put his newly acquired superhuman powers to use." I hope this helps Good Luck

    Hi dbengtsson501,

    How about:

    “To become a real-life superhero, a security guard must decipher how to put his newly acquired superhuman powers to use.”

    I hope this helps
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