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  1. Posted: July 1, 2020In: Romance

    When his doctors are stumped on how to treat his rare disease, a spoiled but sophisticated graduate reluctantly abandons his life view and travels to Papua on the advice of his Papuan girlfriend who believes her Medicine man grandfather can heal him.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on July 1, 2020 at 5:52 pm

    As always, I really enjoy this concept, hope you find the logline that will match

    As always, I really enjoy this concept, hope you find the logline that will match

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  2. Posted: June 29, 2020In: Romance

    In a bid to keep his job, a commitment-phobic womanizer seduces his boss’s wholesome daughter, but when she genuinely falls for him, he must continue the charade.

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    Added an answer on June 30, 2020 at 6:56 am

    How will seducing the wholesome daughter get him on the good side of the boss? Seems like just the opposite would be the case, that the father would be outraged.

    How will seducing the wholesome daughter get him on the good side of the boss? Seems like just the opposite would be the case, that the father would be outraged.

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  3. Posted: June 22, 2020In: Romance

    After a health scare, a middle-aged widower decides to get back in the dating game for the first time in twenty years – but soon finds romance blossoming with his friend’s daughter.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 23, 2020 at 2:10 pm

    "When he falls for his best friend's daughter, a middle-aged man who hasn't dated in years, tries to navigate the relationship without losing his best friend in the process."---------------------------------------------------------------------1: I started with the forward story instead of the back sRead more

    “When he falls for his best friend’s daughter, a middle-aged man who hasn’t dated in years, tries to navigate the relationship without losing his best friend in the process.”

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    1: I started with the forward story instead of the back story.

    2: I also added ‘best’ friend because it gives the lead something to lose. Now the steaks are even higher.

    3: Because it’s his best friends daughter; it’s possible if the lead continues with this relationship with the daughter, he might lose his best friend, (Perhaps the one who helped him through the last 20 years) but at the same time, he doesn’t want to lose the new relationship. So he has to walk a tightrope where he tries to continue the relationship but also tries to maintain his friendship. (Then you add obstacles in the way of the lead character)

    btw great concept

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