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A dead husband waits to be reunited with his wife, but he isn’t the only one waiting.
To avoid a passive character: get him to actually do something for his wife to come to him, in the afterlife. It can a special prayer or a spell or an arrangement with God or the Devil or a sacrifice. He may choose to spend 1000 years in hell just to be with her for the rest of eternity. But then, tRead more
To avoid a passive character: get him to actually do something for his wife to come to him, in the afterlife. It can a special prayer or a spell or an arrangement with God or the Devil or a sacrifice. He may choose to spend 1000 years in hell just to be with her for the rest of eternity.
But then, there is a twist: she comes with another man. Who is this man and why she chose to die with him is up to you.
Finally, what must he do to win her back? The Action.
See lessTwo recently graduated teens take a summer road trip across the country to find who they are and who they want to be.
I enjoy a good road movie. However, as others have said, you are missing the hook in your logline. (The thing that will make people want to read your script.) That doesn't mean there isn't a good hook in your story, it's just that it isn't coming through in your logline.
I enjoy a good road movie. However, as others have said, you are missing the hook in your logline. (The thing that will make people want to read your script.)
See lessThat doesn’t mean there isn’t a good hook in your story, it’s just that it isn’t coming through in your logline.
When she begins dating a man twenty years her senior, an idealist teen must convince her overprotective parents he?s Mr. Right after they objected to his presence at a family dinner.
You added an element that completely changes the story.In your last attempt, the issue was the age difference between her and her boyfriend, now, in this attempt, the issue is not that he is older but that he is perceived to be a trafficker.This change will mean the whole logline must be changed aroRead more
You added an element that completely changes the story.
In your last attempt, the issue was the age difference between her and her boyfriend, now, in this attempt, the issue is not that he is older but that he is perceived to be a trafficker.
This change will mean the whole logline must be changed around that element.
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