1. Posted: January 9, 2018In:

    After filling a lawsuit against a mammoth corporation, an ambitious environmentalist learns that the man representing them is the same guy with whom she had once _______

    PaulJ Logliner

    Would you consider none of the above, and go for the opposite? - a disastrous one night stand... which could create more tension that then blossoms into real romance?

    Would you consider none of the above, and go for the opposite? – a disastrous one night stand… which could create more tension that then blossoms into real romance?

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  2. Posted: December 28, 2017In:

    possible rom-com

    Richiev Singularity

    As written, the woman in your story seems to have the goal, the lead character seems to be swept up into her story. That can work, but only if the lead has a compelling goal as well.

    As written, the woman in your story seems to have the goal, the lead character seems to be swept up into her story.
    That can work, but only if the lead has a compelling goal as well.

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  3. Posted: October 28, 2017In:

    While investigating the darker parts of his corrupt city, a teenaged aristocrat is beguiled and betrayed by a brilliant young drug lord with a troubled past.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter

    Hard to imagine why a noble teenager would be concerned with the underlings of his city enough to investigate and get close to a drug lord. As already indicated, what's the goal for the teenager? To get away from the drug dealer, or stop him completely?

    Hard to imagine why a noble teenager would be concerned with the underlings of his city enough to investigate and get close to a drug lord.

    As already indicated, what’s the goal for the teenager? To get away from the drug dealer, or stop him completely?

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