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  1. Posted: June 19, 2022In: SciFi

    The survivor of a failed space mission must prove his loyalties between the bizarre inhabitants of an asteroid colony and the mad doctor who controls the colony or face certain death in the void of space.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 19, 2022 at 6:30 pm

    What is the central conflict? Is the central conflict just that the lead must prove his loyalty or die? Just curious.

    What is the central conflict?

    Is the central conflict just that the lead must prove his loyalty or die?
    Just curious.

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  2. Posted: June 16, 2022In: SciFi

    When extraterrestrials who believe humans are annihilating the earth by pollution attempt to take a young boy they have bio-engineered to a new planet, the government uses armed forces to prevent this from happening, as they plan to use the boy as a super-soldier.

    Alan H. Jordan Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 17, 2022 at 5:00 am

    This confuses me because I don't understand why they have bioengineered the boy to another planet. Isn't this boy bioengineered to help save the Earth? Why would the armed forces of the Earth have the capability of preventing the boy's abduction? Maybe something like: A boy who has been bioengineereRead more

    This confuses me because I don’t understand why they have bioengineered the boy to another planet. Isn’t this boy bioengineered to help save the Earth?

    Why would the armed forces of the Earth have the capability of preventing the boy’s abduction?

    Maybe something like:

    A boy who has been bioengineered to eradicate the pollution that will end all life on Earth within a year must thwart the attempts of aliens who want to abduct him to save their world instead.

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  3. Posted: May 31, 2022In: SciFi

    In the aftermath of a nuclear war, a young man must defend his town from an alien invasion before they can destroy everything that remains of his life.

    Philippe Le Miere Logliner
    Added an answer on June 4, 2022 at 7:12 am

    "a young man" = protagonist "defend his town from an alien invasion" = goal "before they can destroy everything that remains of his life" = story stakes Like the simplicity of this logline. Expand on main character. Identify a psychological trait, by labeling the young man either: courageous or timiRead more

    “a young man” = protagonist
    “defend his town from an alien invasion” = goal
    “before they can destroy everything that remains of his life” = story stakes

    Like the simplicity of this logline.

    Expand on main character. Identify a psychological trait, by labeling the young man either:
    courageous or timid,
    adventurous or cautious,
    what about Impassioned or Restrained?

    Notice how this gives character, to the main character, suggestive of a potential character arc, and the possibility of our hero growing, out of this imminent conflict.

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