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While in coma, a pessimistic former athlete must regain his self belief to help a police force, that operates within collective unconscious of humanity, stop a powerful psychic taking over everybody’s minds.
I like the seed-concept, a story that leverages Jung's theory of the collective unconscious, but...For one thing, why a coma? ?Couldn't these "adventures" take place while he's asleep? ?Which would create additional complications and tension. Because 2/3 of his time would be spent "out of commissionRead more
I like the seed-concept, a story that leverages Jung’s theory of the collective unconscious, but…
For one thing, why a coma? ?Couldn’t these “adventures” take place while he’s asleep? ?Which would create additional complications and tension. Because 2/3 of his time would be spent “out of commission” — waking life — unable to engage with the psychic daemonic-shadow figure.
Add to that a ticking clock — an urgent need for him to get to sleep early and often — and the complication that he’s an insomniac..
Oh, and an anima-siren/love interest who threatens to lure him to his doom.
As I said, I like the concept, but…
fwiw
See lessWhen all traces of his existence are erased, and his wife and child with a man claiming to be him, a reporter must find out how and why he was deleted to recover his life and family.
In a modern world where one's identity, especially online, is currency losing it could spell disaster.? However, the basic concept would need far too much exposition far too early on for the stakes to be clear. What if his daughter, son, wife or all forget his very existence? This would make the staRead more
In a modern world where one’s identity, especially online, is currency losing it could spell disaster.? However, the basic concept would need far too much exposition far too early on for the stakes to be clear. What if his daughter, son, wife or all forget his very existence? This would make the stakes personal and motivate him to NEED to rectify the situation.
I think getting one’s life back is no big deal, but getting one’s family back is, perhaps make that his goal.
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After he is erased from his wife and kids’ memory, and anyone else who ever knew him, a journalist must find a way to restore their memories in order to get his family back.
After witnessing a UFO crash landing, a precocious silver miner’s daughter tries to make sense of her place in the universe. Too bad, she?s brought the alien home with her.
When she accidentally brings an alien home with her, a precocious country girl must (do this thing) in order to (Stop this bad thing from happening)
When she accidentally brings an alien home with her, a precocious country girl must (do this thing) in order to (Stop this bad thing from happening)
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