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When her mother disappears in a supernatural event, an estranged daughter communes with a world beyond ours to reconcile with her, but discovers that the traumas of her past are insignificant when weighed against the eternal cycle of life.
Consider the following: What relatable supernatural event took the mother? When enlightened by the mother, is there a spiritual or physical goal/dilemma that changes her trajectory in the circle of life? Show don’t tell this “when weighed against the eternal cycle of life.” Hope this helps, keep goiRead more
Consider the following:
What relatable supernatural event took the mother?
When enlightened by the mother, is there a spiritual or physical goal/dilemma that changes her trajectory in the circle of life?
Show don’t tell this “when weighed against the eternal cycle of life.”
Hope this helps, keep going!
See lessA Space Force hires a mercenary to get other recruits to take down their mentor who betrayed them.
These guys hire another guy, to recruit some other guys to do a job... ...Take the long way home
These guys hire another guy, to recruit some other guys to do a job…
…Take the long way home
See lessA stubborn, inquisitive anthropologist believes an unidentified body found by the NYC police is a Neanderthal, but her investigation is quickly and ruthlessly suppressed by a secretive organization with links to the ultra-rich.
Great logline. But a couple of comments... Would like to know how the anthropologist is connected to the NYPD. Was she hired by? Is she working with an NYPD detective? Stubborn and inquisitive are good descriptors but don't seem to carry any weight. Are anthropologists normally apathetic and lethargRead more
Great logline. But a couple of comments…
Would like to know how the anthropologist is connected to the NYPD. Was she hired by? Is she working with an NYPD detective?
Stubborn and inquisitive are good descriptors but don’t seem to carry any weight. Are anthropologists normally apathetic and lethargic? Is he/she stubborn and inquisitive in face of the disinterest of the NYPD? What is the character contrast that will create conflict in the story?
Don’t like the word quickly in this context. Doesn’t add anything to it. I think it still reads well with: “…her investigation is ruthlessly suppressed by…”
Nice job, though.
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