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  1. Posted: January 23, 2016In: SciFi

    A faithless young girl is recruited into a war of witches and must believe in herself and magic enough to use a legendary wand to end the conflict.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on January 31, 2016 at 12:53 pm

    Good points raised above.In answer to your question a logline isn't suppose to explain all the plot points of the inner journey, as DPG mentioned it's the outer journey plot that it's suppose to tell. It's through the character and obstacle descriptions that the inner journey is inferred, and it's tRead more

    Good points raised above.

    In answer to your question a logline isn’t suppose to explain all the plot points of the inner journey, as DPG mentioned it’s the outer journey plot that it’s suppose to tell. It’s through the character and obstacle descriptions that the inner journey is inferred, and it’s through the cause and effect relationship between the inciting incident and goal that the motivations and stakes are made clear.

    For example:

    The inciting incident of the galactic empire burning Luke’s uncle and aunt motivated him to seek revenge against the man in charge. It’s also connected via a cause and effect relationship to his outer journey goal – stopping the empire’s Death Star.? However, a peek under the surface and we can see that the hero needs to learn to let go of anger on account of being vengeful – his inner journey goal.

    If we keep looking we see that the empire is dangerous and well equipped (killed and burned a whole settlement in? a few hours), so now we also get a sense of the magnitude of the hero’s obstacle.

    But wait there’s more!!!

    As this is a galactic empire the reader now knows the stakes at hand – freedom across the whole galaxy.

    So much was inferred with so few words, point is that with a well structured logline a strong concept will answer all the required questions.

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  2. Posted: September 24, 2015In: SciFi

    When an astronaut learns that his fianc?e is sent on a space trip at near-lightspeed, he must find her before their age difference prevents them from ever having a family together.

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    isabel.g Logliner
    Added an answer on January 12, 2016 at 8:16 pm

    Love this, great idea, i'd definitely watch.

    Love this, great idea, i’d definitely watch.

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  3. Posted: December 30, 2015In: SciFi

    A young couple become intruders in their own home after they discover it’s being shared by a couple who look exactly like them.

    kbfilmworks Samurai
    Added an answer on January 4, 2016 at 7:45 am

    Thanks, dpg. Actually, as per the original logline, the dramatic question is: Why is this happening?

    Thanks, dpg. Actually, as per the original logline, the dramatic question is: Why is this happening?

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