This might work better from the point of view of a couple who want to have a child more than anything in the world

Now the couple has to jump through the hoops of this corrupt committee, which stands in the way of them achieving their goal.

So you would have a lead character (One of the couple) who have a goal which means the world to them, and something standing in their way. (Although you might want to put a face to this committee)

And best of all the story would be personal because everyone could relate to it.

I say this because in your logline you have a lead character who has no goal, therefore there is no conflict. and without conflict, there is no story.