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  1. Posted: April 12, 2019In: SciFi

    When a struggling video game designer begins seeing his characters in real life, he suspects he?s already playing a game of his own creation and begins searching for patterns to help complete and escape the game.

    Ckharper Samurai
    Added an answer on April 24, 2019 at 4:53 pm

    I know this is sci-fi but I still struggle with how could this happen? Is it psychological? Anyhow, maybe something like... An unbalanced video game developer starts encountering his own characters in his ?real? life, blurring his lines between reality and fiction. The only way out seems to be to plRead more

    I know this is sci-fi but I still struggle with how could this happen? Is it psychological?

    Anyhow, maybe something like…

    An unbalanced video game developer starts encountering his own characters in his ?real? life, blurring his lines between reality and fiction. The only way out seems to be to play the game.

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  2. Posted: April 22, 2019In: SciFi

    When her adopted brother threatens a hostile takeover of the family business, a resentful cyborg must come out of hiding to stop him.

    Robb Ross Samurai
    Added an answer on April 24, 2019 at 10:40 am

    Oops, saying more about her includes her humanity. Like, "After being enhanced (as above, the robot part), a (the human part)..."

    Oops, saying more about her includes her humanity. Like, “After being enhanced (as above, the robot part), a (the human part)…“

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  3. Posted: April 22, 2019In: SciFi

    A future Test-Pilot stranded at the fare side of the Galaxy trying to find a way home while solving the mystery of a black planet.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on April 23, 2019 at 1:12 pm

    Normally the word 'Stranded' is a good word to use. If someone is 'stranded' on a desert island, we get a picture of the situation. But in the specific case of this logline, you need just a word or two more. I decided to think, off the top of my head, reasons why a pilot might be stranded. 1: His spRead more

    Normally the word ‘Stranded‘ is a good word to use. If someone is ‘stranded‘ on a desert island, we get a picture of the situation.

    But in the specific case of this logline, you need just a word or two more.
    I decided to think, off the top of my head, reasons why a pilot might be stranded.

    1: His spaceship ran out of fuel.
    2: His spaceship broke down.
    3: His spaceship blew up.
    4: He was captured by aliens
    5: The mysterious black planet interfered with the workings of his spaceship.

    Since the mysterious black planet seems to be the hook of your story, I would go with number 4 and connect why he is stranded directly to the mysterious black planet.
    Now the lead must explore the black planet if he is to stop the interference and complete his goal of getting home.

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