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A neuropsychologist must use an experimental technology that allows her to enter the minds of her patients in order to save a severely abused woman in a coma, but when inexplicable and frightening things begin happening in her real life, she realizes she must save herself or risk losing her own sanity.
A female neuropsychologist who uses experimental technology to save a patient in a coma realizes she must save her own sanity as she begins to experience inexplicable and terrifying moments in her own life.
A female neuropsychologist who uses experimental technology to save a patient in a coma realizes she must save her own sanity as she begins to experience inexplicable and terrifying moments in her own life.
See lessWhen the disappearance of his wife falls in the hands of androids, a flawed father must seek answers to the reasoning behind his loss while mistakenly neglecting his daughter in the process
You might want to reconsider the first line. (up to the coma) I am not quite sure what you mean by, "When the disappearance of his wife falls in the hands of androids..." The way the line is written makes its meaning unclear. Here is just a guess: ----- "When his wife is killed by androids, a flawedRead more
You might want to reconsider the first line. (up to the coma)
I am not quite sure what you mean by, “When the disappearance of his wife falls in the hands of androids…”
The way the line is written makes its meaning unclear. Here is just a guess:
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“When his wife is killed by androids, a flawed father seeks answers to the loss, while mistakenly neglecting his daughter.”
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Anyway, a little re-write with some clarity will help the logline get across what is clearly an interesting story concept.
The survivor of a failed space mission must prove his loyalties between the bizarre inhabitants of an asteroid colony and the mad doctor who controls the colony or face certain death in the void of space.
What is the central conflict? Is the central conflict just that the lead must prove his loyalty or die? Just curious.
What is the central conflict?
Is the central conflict just that the lead must prove his loyalty or die?
See lessJust curious.