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A group of high school students gains superpowers after having a freak accident get revenge on their bullies.
Cool, try changing "freak accident" to your version of how these high schoolers attained superpowers. Example: "After escaping an alien abduction beam, a group of high schoolers seeks revenge on their bully tormentors using their newfound superpowers" Happy New Year!
Cool, try changing “freak accident” to your version of how these high schoolers attained superpowers.
Example:
“After escaping an alien abduction beam, a group of high schoolers seeks revenge on their bully tormentors using their newfound superpowers”
Happy New Year!
See lessWith a near-bankrupt Gotham City descending into chaos in the wake of an unjustified police shooting, Lieutenant James Gordon is approached on behalf of a group of Gotham’s bankers to instigate a police-lead coup of Mayor Garcia’s administration and install leadership more favourable to the banker’s wishes so as to restore order to the city.
Sorry, when I read the logline I was a bit confused. I got the first part, Gotham going bankrupt. Then bankers go to a lieutenant to stop a mayor? It’s a superhero movie, but where is the superhero? I read the summary that it’s based on a graphic novel. To me, it reads political drama. To make it moRead more
Sorry, when I read the logline I was a bit confused. I got the first part, Gotham going bankrupt. Then bankers go to a lieutenant to stop a mayor? It’s a superhero movie, but where is the superhero? I read the summary that it’s based on a graphic novel. To me, it reads political drama. To make it more understandable Just concentrate on the main protagonist, the conflict, antagonist force( who is trying to stop the protagonist) and the main goal. Don’t use a person’s name in the logline. Just list the protagonist and a adjective that describes them. It needs some refining, but your goal is to have a logline that is simple, everyone gets it, and wants to read it. Keep up the hard work.
See lessA timid college student has his world turned upside when he learns that he is not entirely human and his father is a ex demon king.
"When he learns his father was an ex-demon king, an unsuspecting college student must..." (Then tell us what he must do)
“When he learns his father was an ex-demon king, an unsuspecting college student must…” (Then tell us what he must do)
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