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  1. Posted: April 2, 2016In: Thriller

    In a modern European country, a deadly terrorist group carries out an attack, a naive young school dropout must get would-be victims to safety.

    Benneth Logliner
    Added an answer on April 8, 2016 at 1:34 am

    What about this? When his mentor set's him up with a bomb in a train terror attack, a naive young man, while being accused of terrorism must evacuate passengers which will be killed in his name

    What about this?

    When his mentor set’s him up with a bomb in a train terror attack, a naive young man, while being accused of terrorism must evacuate passengers which will be killed in his name

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  2. Posted: April 4, 2016In: Thriller

    A powerful, critically acclaimed director pushes a naive, up-and-coming actor into the realm of psychosis, all for the sake of the character.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on April 5, 2016 at 10:57 am

    From the logline it seems the director is the lead character, the one with the goal and moving the story forwards. If so, why do we want the director to succeed? What is our motivation to like the lead character.

    From the logline it seems the director is the lead character, the one with the goal and moving the story forwards. If so, why do we want the director to succeed? What is our motivation to like the lead character.

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  3. Posted: March 30, 2016In: Thriller

    When a doctor learns he has a kill-mate, a stranger that will be triggered to kill him if they cross paths, he must plot their murder, or risk a deadly encounter.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on March 31, 2016 at 5:49 pm

    I like the twist ending if the MC finds out he was the kill mate for the other person all along it would add a sens of irony that would elevate the concept as a whole. Having them both as two Jo Shmoe's ala' Walter White could work, but making the target a big rich person and the MC a poor person prRead more

    I like the twist ending if the MC finds out he was the kill mate for the other person all along it would add a sens of irony that would elevate the concept as a whole.

    Having them both as two Jo Shmoe’s ala’ Walter White could work, but making the target a big rich person and the MC a poor person provides the MC with greater obstacles on his way to get to his “kill-mate”. So for the sake of your plot it may be better to place them at different ends of the socioeconomic scale.

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