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  1. Posted: September 25, 2015In: Thriller

    What would you do if a fortune teller had been right on the money six days stright; would you bet everything on the seventh days prediction… even the life of your new wife?

    priggy Logliner
    Added an answer on September 29, 2015 at 12:27 am

    This is more of a tagline than a logline. A logline has a clear protagonist, antagonist, goal and stakes. Whilst this is an interesting concept and reminds me of a Derren Brown special called The System.

    This is more of a tagline than a logline.

    A logline has a clear protagonist, antagonist, goal and stakes. Whilst this is an interesting concept and reminds me of a Derren Brown special called The System.

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  2. Posted: September 28, 2015In: Thriller

    ?An art forgery investigator deciphers location of stolen diamonds using her brother’s diary that mysteriously appears at her doorstep. She embarks on a hunt for the treasure finding her family lost decades ago and the truth about her father who masterminded an international heist.?

    Chris Andrews Penpusher
    Added an answer on September 28, 2015 at 11:31 am

    Sounds intriguing. I'd recommend streamlining it so it's a little less complicated. The logline is getting lost in the detail of the story.

    Sounds intriguing. I’d recommend streamlining it so it’s a little less complicated. The logline is getting lost in the detail of the story.

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  3. Posted: September 27, 2015In: Thriller

    A group of young activists abduct a senior politician and use a psychological mind game to extract a murder confession but he turns the game around, insisting he has proof that one of them is a government agent.

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    kbfilmworks Samurai
    Added an answer on September 28, 2015 at 12:17 am

    Thanks, Karel. Much appreciated. "A group of young activists abduct a senior politician and use a psychological mind game to extract a murder confession as part of a clever scheme to extort millions but he turns the game around by convincing them that there's a traitor in their ranks and the proof iRead more

    Thanks, Karel. Much appreciated.

    “A group of young activists abduct a senior politician and use a psychological mind game to extract a murder confession as part of a clever scheme to extort millions but he turns the game around by convincing them that there’s a traitor in their ranks and the proof is in a security briefcase along with the millions in his safe deposit box”.

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