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A wounded African American man seeking refuge from BLM riots appears at the door of a rich family. After taking him in, he appears on the news as wanted for murder and the family must decide if he was framed, or face the consequences of harboring a murderer.
It is too long. Remove the unnecessary words.
It is too long. Remove the unnecessary words.
See lessAfter a freak accident, a pacifist schoolteacher finds that his memories now include a combustive war veteran’s vengeance.
So what's he going to do about it? You've given us a setup but no plot.
So what’s he going to do about it? You’ve given us a setup but no plot.
See lessAfter believing that his son is possessed, a former sinful man learns that the spirit is son’s mother whom the man had shot dead a few years ago and she wants revenge
This logline doesn't have an action. Who is the protagonist? I'm assuming it's the sinful man but the logline reads as though the mother could be the protagonist. If it's the man that's the protagonist what does he do once his wife possesses his son? Also I wouldn't use the word "believing" in the lRead more
This logline doesn’t have an action. Who is the protagonist? I’m assuming it’s the sinful man but the logline reads as though the mother could be the protagonist. If it’s the man that’s the protagonist what does he do once his wife possesses his son?
Also I wouldn’t use the word “believing” in the logline. I would just say something like “After a reformed sinner’s son is possessed by the vengeful wife he murdered, he must find a way to exorcise her before the truth is revealed.”
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