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When a veteran intelligence officer, struggling to adjust to post-war life, begins to find secret codes everywhere she must follow the trail to satisfy her obsession. No matter how far that takes her.
What are the stakes? What does she gain by deciphering the codes? What will she lose if she doesn't.
What are the stakes? What does she gain by deciphering the codes? What will she lose if she doesn’t.
See lessWhen he learns his wife is planning to kill him, a rich man invites her secret lovers to a dinner party, and offers them each a fortune to kill her first.
An interesting idea, but suggest it needs vetting. Like, how can her lovers be a "secret" -- but he knows who they are so he can invite them to a dinner party? I suggest narrowing the focus down to a triangulation of characters: the rich guy and his philandering wife and her lover. Maybe something lRead more
An interesting idea, but suggest it needs vetting.
Like, how can her lovers be a “secret” — but he knows who they are so he can invite them to a dinner party?
I suggest narrowing the focus down to a triangulation of characters: the rich guy and his philandering wife and her lover.
Maybe something like:
After he learns his unfaithful wife intends to kill him, a wealthy man offers a million dollars to her lover to kill her first. (24 words0
Or mix it up: the wife offers to pay her lover to kill her husband — and then he counters with an equally lucrative reward for the lover to kill her.
Or they both have lovers and both offer their lovers a $1 million to kill the other spouse. Who will collect first?
Anyway, the premise can go down any one of several plot paths — which is a good sign.
See lessA sound effects man teams up with a cop has seven days to go after a murder suspect who killed a teenage girl who happens to be his daughter.
I revised it.
I revised it.
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