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  1. Posted: March 28, 2020In: Thriller

    On the verge of madness, a grieving man attacks his stubborn stepchild, chasing him onto private property, but when the psychotic landowner captures them he must learn to accept and work together with the boy to escape before they are both killed.

    dho1115 Logliner
    Added an answer on March 29, 2020 at 11:02 am

    I assume the grieving man's madness is due to the fact he has to care for his stepchild? Here is another version of the logline you may want to consider: "A quick-tempered man and his stubborn stepchild must set aside their differences to escape when they find themselves being held hostage inside aRead more

    I assume the grieving man’s madness is due to the fact he has to care for his stepchild?

    Here is another version of the logline you may want to consider:

    “A quick-tempered man and his stubborn stepchild must set aside their differences to escape when they find themselves being held hostage inside a deranged psychopath’s secluded property”.

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  2. Posted: March 20, 2020In: Thriller

    A disruptive and mute 8-year-old must battle his abusive stepfather who is persuaded to kill him by the ghost of his recently deceased son.

    thedarkhorse Samurai
    Added an answer on March 21, 2020 at 3:41 am

    Warned by a ghost that his stepfather is a murderer, a mute boy sets out to prove it. or Warned by the ghost of his stepfather's son that his stepfather is a murderer, a mute boy sets out to prove it.    

    Warned by a ghost that his stepfather is a murderer, a mute boy sets out to prove it.

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    Warned by the ghost of his stepfather’s son that his stepfather is a murderer, a mute boy sets out to prove it.

     

     

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  3. Posted: March 18, 2020In: Thriller

    Many believe the most dreaded words in a hospital are ‘Code Blue, they are wrong. Although serious, they are not even close to those that strike fear in the most hardened hospital administrator: “We are about to exceed ‘Surge Capacity'”.

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    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on March 19, 2020 at 9:20 pm

    Who is the lead character? What is their goal? What is standing in their way?

    Who is the lead character?

    What is their goal?

    What is standing in their way?

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