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Families must take the law into their own hands after they discover the new neighbors aren’t the perfect family everyone thought they were.
A logline must be compelling, it's what sells the story to the industry. Your logline would improve and draw the reader in if it were more specific. There should be a specific event that compels the family to take the law into their own hands and that event should be personal. The event should alsoRead more
A logline must be compelling, it’s what sells the story to the industry.
Your logline would improve and draw the reader in if it were more specific.
There should be a specific event that compels the family to take the law into their own hands and that event should be personal.
The event should also be horrific enough that the reader will understand why it might compel an ordinary person to take the law into their own hands.
Finally, there should be stakes of some sort if the lead character fails.
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Whose story is this, the young autistic woman's or the cop's? Whose PoV will we follow?
Whose story is this, the young autistic woman’s or the cop’s? Whose PoV will we follow?
See lessA divorcé redirects his self-hatred upon the very private investigator he had paid to spy on his ex after discovering their newly established relationship.
Hi Lotcher, What do you think of this? "An abusive jealous divorcee seeks vendetta against the private investigator he paid to spy on his ex, after discovering he has established a romantic relationship with her. I hope this helps Good Luck
Hi Lotcher,
What do you think of this?
“An abusive jealous divorcee seeks vendetta against the private investigator he paid to spy on his ex, after discovering he has established a romantic relationship with her.
I hope this helps
See lessGood Luck