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After a well planned ambush on an armored truck carrying arms, a cop must find the people behind it before the weapons hit the streets.
Agreed with the above - this reads like a standard police procedural episode. Ultimately, it's about a guy doing his job but what you need is for it to be about a motivated guy doing something out of the ordinary. Could his brother or sister be involved in a gang and he knows that the weapons were tRead more
Agreed with the above – this reads like a standard police procedural episode. Ultimately, it’s about a guy doing his job but what you need is for it to be about a motivated guy doing something out of the ordinary. Could his brother or sister be involved in a gang and he knows that the weapons were taken by a rival gang?
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I like the logline and the story seems to be not only fresh, but also very interesting. I would just add another element at the end of your logline. Maybe urgency gives your concept another boost.
I like the logline and the story seems to be not only fresh, but also very interesting.
See lessI would just add another element at the end of your logline.
Maybe urgency gives your concept another boost.
After their identities are stolen, a young couple need to find their enemies, fast.
Why must they discover who stole their identities? The answer is; identity fraud, best you describe that as the inciting incident, not the house swap. After their identities were stolen, a couple must... Inciting incident aside, you don't describe their goal, which makes the plot vague. If their ideRead more
Why must they discover who stole their identities? The answer is; identity fraud, best you describe that as the inciting incident, not the house swap.
After their identities were stolen, a couple must…
Inciting incident aside, you don’t describe their goal, which makes the plot vague. If their identities were stolen their goal is to stop the thieves not just find out who they are, this may seem implicit, but in loglines you have to describe the goal and how they plan on achieving it.
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