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  1. Posted: October 2, 2020In: Western

    After a long career, a retired sheriff in the old west is forced to defend himself against war crime allegations from the civil war. Dividing the town and discrediting his legacy.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on October 2, 2020 at 10:16 pm

    I think it's a solid premise and logline. Here are some minor changes without changing it too much. ------------------------------------------ "After a storied career, a renown sheriff is forced to defend himself against civil war crimes, dividing his town and threatening his legacy."

    I think it’s a solid premise and logline. Here are some minor changes without changing it too much.
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    “After a storied career, a renown sheriff is forced to defend himself against civil war crimes, dividing his town and threatening his legacy.”

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  2. Posted: June 25, 2020In: Western

    After being transplanted with the arm of a recently executed bandit, a shy and coward farmer must learn how to control his new body part and overcome his cowardice when a violent gang led by the bandit’s vicious brother threaten the town and the woman he loves.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on June 28, 2020 at 2:49 am

    What's the setting both in time and place?

    What’s the setting both in time and place?

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  3. Posted: June 4, 2019In: Comedy, Examples, Western

    When a washed-up championship cowboy, reduced to shilling for a huge conglomerate, discovers its championship racehorse is being doped on drugs, he steals the horse to liberate it from commercial exploitation.

    savinh0 Samurai
    Added an answer on June 18, 2020 at 4:12 pm

    Unfortunately, I missed this post. But I'm happy reading it now. Like the premise and your logline pitches a great story. To be honest, I didn't know this movie. Not my times, but I will check it out. Thanks :) Also, it's crazy, like you said: they started the project without having the full story.Read more

    Unfortunately, I missed this post.
    But I’m happy reading it now.
    Like the premise and your logline pitches a great story.
    To be honest, I didn’t know this movie. Not my times, but I will check it out. Thanks 🙂
    Also, it’s crazy, like you said: they started the project without having the full story. This says something about the power of a fantastic premise.
    Fonda and Redford? What a duo!

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