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See lessAn emotionally & physically abused teen witnesses the murder of his family, his abuser responsible. ?Now an adult, he along with his K9 enact revenge on the entire family responsible, destroying their?family business of drugs and prostitution.?
As Nir suggested, the problem with the negative goal, particularly if he ends up taking revenge on the entire family (not just the one person who murdered his family), is that the audience might struggle to get behind him. What's making him any better than the guy who killed his family? Is he a cop?Read more
As Nir suggested, the problem with the negative goal, particularly if he ends up taking revenge on the entire family (not just the one person who murdered his family), is that the audience might struggle to get behind him. What’s making him any better than the guy who killed his family?
Is he a cop? Using K9 (as opposed to canine) suggests a law enforcement dog such as a German Shepherd. This should be clarified ALTHOUGH the dog seems to have no bearing on the story based on this logline so I see no reason to include it. If you took this element out of the story and everything still starts and finishes the same way then take it out of the logline.
What sort of adult is this guy now? Give us a characteristic and/or a profession. That’ll tell us a bit about who he is now.
See lessA tragic traffic accident changes the course of 3 characters who passionately pursue morally unacceptable loves. – Amores Perros (Love’s a bitch)
This is a film that as a whole defies reduction to the standard logline formula.? The film interweaves? the separate lives and loves of three principals.? ?The primary plot line that dominates the 1st hour is about a young man who acts like a cue ball? breaking the rack of the other principals.? ThaRead more
This is a film that as a whole defies reduction to the standard logline formula.? The film interweaves? the separate lives and loves of three principals.? ?The primary plot line that dominates the 1st hour is about a young man who acts like a cue ball? breaking the rack of the other principals.? That is,? his life literally collides with the other two, sending the trajectories of their plots in different directions than the ones they originally intended.
All the while,? the “cue ball” character remains steadfast in his objective goal.?So, focusing only on the character whose goal remains unchanged:
A young? man plots to win enough money from dog fighting to flee town with the woman he is madly in love with, his brother’s wife.
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One common denominator among the principals is that they own dogs.? Dogs play pivotal roles in all 3 plot lines.
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