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  1. Posted: August 24, 2013In: Public

    When Jacob, a genteel theater actor, becomes a mob boss through mistaken identity. He is forced to work with Mia a police detective, in order to incarcerate the notorious Big Bamzy and save his own life. This is a logline for the narrative of a 10 episode TV comedy series.

    Judah Ray Logliner
    Added an answer on February 1, 2017 at 5:49 am

    Drop the when, it's not needed, and makes the first sentance ready funky. Unless you add a comma after identity, and lowercase the h in he. Don;t take this the wrong way, this idea has been done time-and-time again. Maybe think of a twist to incoperate, and seperate yours from the rest.

    Drop the when, it’s not needed, and makes the first sentance ready funky. Unless you add a comma after identity, and lowercase the h in he. Don;t take this the wrong way, this idea has been done time-and-time again. Maybe think of a twist to incoperate, and seperate yours from the rest.

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  2. Posted: August 9, 2014In: Public

    After his aunt dies, a notoriously obnoxious lawyer will inherit 100 million dollars on the condition that he gets 5000 new friends on facebook within a week without using a computer. Or loose the money to a rival lawyer in charge of her estate.

    Judah Ray Logliner
    Added an answer on February 1, 2017 at 5:46 am

    Very socially relevant. I like the idea and theme. Good stuff. Keep up the great work.

    Very socially relevant. I like the idea and theme. Good stuff. Keep up the great work.

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  3. Posted: January 13, 2017In: Public

    Any screenwriters out there want to help me

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    Added an answer on January 20, 2017 at 8:04 pm

    I used to have the same problem until I came across this solution from a produced writer friend. If you have too many ideas, and can't decide which one to do, just leave them sitting in your head for a while. 2-6 months works for me. Think about them when your in bed, in the shower, riding the bus,Read more

    I used to have the same problem until I came across this solution from a produced writer friend. If you have too many ideas, and can’t decide which one to do, just leave them sitting in your head for a while. 2-6 months works for me. Think about them when your in bed, in the shower, riding the bus, whenever you get a chance. The ones you can’t stop thinking about, you can’t get out of your head for six months, they are the ones you write.

    So, step two. The writing. Don’t plan. Don’t outline. All of that should be done in your head in those six months. Just set aside two-three days. And write. Start on page one and, until you get get to page ninety, don’t stop. I don’t care if it’s the worst thing ever and neither should you, this is your vomit draft. But it’s finished. This document should have loose ends, plot holes and character paradoxes littered throughout. Because no one should see this EVER and it is really just for you to experiment with. Because now the work really begins for you.

    Leave it for six weeks. Let it sit. Roll around in that big brain of yours. Start another project if you want. Then rewrite it Now you’re ready to show it to show it to somebody. Repeat cycle.

    Hope this helps.

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